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4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
The email effectively communicates concerns and requests while maintaining a polite tone. Minor grammatical issues and vague phrasing slightly detract from its overall effectiveness.
25 / 30
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Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear expression of concern — “I am writing to express my concerns about the new treadmills recently installed at the gym.”
- Explanation of impact — “Because of these issues, I have faced to cancel some of my workouts, which has affected my exercise routine drastically.”
To improve
- Vague request for compensation Try: some form of compensation, such as an extension of membership.
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