Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the applicant's interest and request for information, but it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks detailed elaboration. Improvements in language accuracy and more specific examples would enhance the overall quality.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses continued interest — “I am highly interested in this scholarship because I believe that it will support my future academic and professional goals.”
- Provides context — “I submitted all the required documents and completed the application process.”
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