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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main points but lacks detail regarding the correct course. There are several grammatical errors that detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the message.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear identification of the issue — “I recently signed up for an online course on digital marketing, but I realized that I accidentally registered for the wrong course.”
- Expression of gratitude — “Thank you for your time and consideration.”
To improve
- Lack of specificity about the intended course Try: Please find the attached details of the wrong course for your reference. I intended to register for the 'Advanced Digital Marketing Strategies' course. My phone number is 111-111-111.
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