Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main points but suffers from several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improvements in language accuracy and elaboration would enhance the overall quality of the response.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses enthusiasm — “I am thrilled to send my two peoms, based your announce post, in your deeply appreciate magazine”
To improve
- Technical issue description Try: Unfortunately, while submitting on your platform, I encountered technical malfunctions, including a slow upload process and no confirmation message of successful receipt.
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