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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the necessary inquiries and maintains a polite tone. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and a lack of varied sentence structures, which detracts from its overall effectiveness.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am a a university student planning an end-of-semester party for a study group.”
- Inquiry about menu options — “I would like to ask about the different menu options available, especially for a budget of $500.”
- Dietary restrictions inquiry — “Moreover, i would like to know if they can accommodate dietary restrictions such as vegetarian and gluten-free options.”
To improve
- Lack of confirmation request Try: Could you please confirm if you are available to cater on December 15th and deliver to the university student lounge?
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