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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email demonstrates an attempt to express interest in volunteering and provides some personal background. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, which detract from the overall effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses interest in volunteering — “I am writing to express my willignes to be one of your volunteer”
- Mentions relevant experience — “Based on my experience on the College, as a third year student, major in Biology, as a volunteer cordinator in our campus”
- Expresses willingness to learn — “I would be appreciate to provide me any additional requirements, based your police.”
To improve
- Vague availability description Try: I am available most weekdays and can adjust my schedule to meet your needs.
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