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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the cancellation request and includes necessary details, but it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks syntactic variety. Improving language accuracy and elaboration would enhance the overall quality of the response.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear reason for cancellation — “i have a family emergency and i cannot attend the event.”
- Includes ticket purchase details — “My ticket purchase number is 15987 under the name of salahedine chafi, the day of purchase is 14/07/2026”
- Offers supporting documentation — “I have supporting documentation from the hospital.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: I would appreciate it if you could consider providing a refund or a credit for future events, given the unforeseen circumstances.
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