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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the purpose and maintains a polite tone, but it suffers from grammatical issues and awkward phrasing that detract from overall clarity. Improving language accuracy and syntactic variety would enhance the response significantly.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Expresses continued interest — “Express your continued interest in the scholarship.”
- References application details — “Reference your application details.”
To improve
- Unclear timeline inquiry Try: Could you please provide an updated and accurate timeline for the decision process?
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