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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main points but lacks depth and specificity in elaboration. Additionally, there are several grammatical errors that detract from the overall clarity and professionalism of the message.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses appreciation for the course — “I really love to take my online course which provides main concepts of digital sociology through online system.”
- Identifies a specific technical issue — “Some of verification codes never sent to my email, therefore I could not login several times.”
- Offers a suggestion for improvement — “I think providing public question and answer pages would very helpfult for future students.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration on course value Try: I really appreciated the online course because it provided comprehensive insights into digital sociology, allowing me to understand key concepts deeply and apply them in practical scenarios.
- Insufficient detail on technical issues Try: On multiple occasions, the system failed to send verification codes to my email, which prevented me from logging in and accessing the course materials. This issue disrupted my learning schedule and caused significant inconvenience.
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