Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively introduces the sender and expresses interest in the research project, but it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improving language accuracy and syntactic variety would enhance the overall effectiveness of the email.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Introduction — “My name is Ryuya Inoue. I am a student of Greenfield University and I majoring in Environmental Science.”
- Expression of Interest — “I recently become interested in marine ecosystems and I am eager to gain hands-on experience.”
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