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2.0/ 5
DevelopingMostly Unsuccessful
The email addresses the task but is poorly structured and contains many grammatical errors. The lack of specific details and coherent suggestions significantly weakens the overall effectiveness.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “thank you for your time and assitance to answering this email.”
- Clear intent — “I am writing this email because I wanted express my disappointed experience”
To improve
- Lack of specific suggestions Try: I would appreciate it if you could address these issues by improving the login system and ensuring lectures are available on time.
- Vague description of technical issues Try: The website had several issues, such as login failures and unavailable lectures, which made it difficult to access course materials.
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