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2.0/ 5
DevelopingMostly Unsuccessful
The email includes a greeting and a closing, which are positive aspects of social conventions. However, the overall language quality is weak, with numerous grammatical errors and vague elaboration that limits the effectiveness of the communication.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Clear expression of intent — “I am writing this email exprece with you that i liked the new magazine.”
- Direct request for information — “I would like to ask about the status of my submissions.”
To improve
- Lack of detail about the problem Try: there is an issue with the online submission form that needs improvement.
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