Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main points but suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that hinder clarity. Improvements in language accuracy and elaboration would enhance the overall effectiveness of the message.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear identification — “My name is Ryuya Inoue and I am a student n Dr. Emily Carter's 'Introduction to Quantum Mechanics' class at Jefferson University.”
- Expression of gratitude — “Thank you for your time and condsideration.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity in request Try: I am writing to ask for clarification on the lecture.
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