Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the intent to inquire about the submission status but lacks detail and contains several grammatical errors. Improvements in language accuracy and elaboration would enhance clarity and effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time and attention.”
- Clear request for action — “Could you check the status of my subject ?”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration on magazine appreciation Try: I decided to submit two of my poems because I admire the magazine's dedication to showcasing diverse voices and its beautiful design.
- Vague description of the problem Try: The site displayed an error message when I attempted to upload my poems, and I am unsure if my submissions were successfully received.
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