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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email introduces the writer and mentions the conference, but it lacks specific details about the research and the context of the inquiry. There are several grammatical errors, such as 'i am a student is' instead of 'I am a student in', which detracts from the overall clarity and professionalism.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear introduction — “My name is salahedine chafi, i am a student is the electrical engineering department.”
- Direct request — “I would like to ask about late registration options,”
- Expression of interest — “i am very interested in presenting my research about it.”
To improve
- Lack of detail Try: I recently learned about the upcoming academic conference in electrical power engineering from my professor, Dr. Jone, who recommended it due to its relevance to my research interests.
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