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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email introduces the sender and explains how they learned about the conference, but it suffers from grammatical errors and vague phrasing that hinder clarity. The tone is mostly appropriate, but the language accuracy needs significant improvement.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Introduction — “I am Bridget Jones, graduate student at Duke Uneversity, specializing in microbiology and biochemistry.”
- Expression of Interest — “I kindly ask for your attention on my case, based on my valuable knowledge and facing with up-to date information during the conference, and generally, profesional development.”
To improve
- Request for Late Registration Try: I kindly request information on late registration options, as attending the conference would greatly benefit my professional development and allow me to share my up-to-date research findings.
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