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4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
The email effectively communicates the heating issue and its effects, maintaining a polite tone throughout. However, some grammatical inaccuracies and a lack of sophisticated vocabulary prevent it from reaching a higher score.
25 / 30
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4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear description of the problem — “the warming level in the flat is around 12-13 degrees”
- Explanation of personal impact — “the temperature in your apartment drops significantly at night”
- Request for specific timeline — “Request a specific timeline for repairs”
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