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3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the main points and maintains a polite tone, but it suffers from awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. Improving the clarity and accuracy of language would enhance the overall effectiveness of the message.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear inquiry — “I would like to ask about your menu options availability that suit a budget of $500.”
- Specific date request — “Could you kindly confirm if your services could be available on December 15th”
To improve
- Lack of clarity Try: if you are able to provide specific meal types such as vegetarian and gluten-free options.
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