Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email attempts to address all requirements and maintains a polite tone, but it suffers from several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. The elaboration is limited, and the overall clarity is affected, resulting in a score of 3.0.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear request — “I am writing mentioned to you my sudden unexpected family curcumstences, what is for reason to kindly ask you for examption in return policy ticket.”
- Gratitude expressed — “Thank you for your time and willigness.”
To improve
- Lack of specific details Try: I purchased premier tickets for the football game on September 16, 2023, with order number #123456.
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