Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email successfully introduces the writer and poses relevant questions, but it suffers from grammatical errors and vague elaboration. Improving language accuracy and providing more specific details would enhance the overall effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Introduction — “I am Bridget Jones, third year student at Duke University, specialized in spanish language.”
- Purpose of Email — “I informed about possiblites to be student In Toledo, during winter semester.”
- Request for Information — “My main questions are related important topics, such as transfer and number of credits and housing financial support.”
To improve
- Specificity and Detail Try: I would appreciate detailed information about the program and how the credits will transfer back to my home university after the semester.
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