Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively introduces the sender and addresses the necessary questions, showing a clear intent. However, it suffers from several grammatical errors and lacks the sophistication in language and sentence structure needed for a higher score.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear introduction — “My name is Sapna Nadeem. I am a dentist from Pakistan.”
- Expresses interest — “I wantedto express my high interest in applying for this course in my next semester.”
To improve
- Capitalization error Try: I have some questions
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