Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the intent and includes most required elements, but it suffers from grammatical errors and a lack of syntactic variety. Improving clarity and expanding on the questions would enhance the overall quality.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear introduction — “I am Mohamed Labib , I applied for the on campaus program for MBA 2026 program.”
- Clear request for information — “I would appreciate if you can let me know the application deadline ,so I can meet the dealone and submit my application on time.”
To improve
- Lack of specific questions about housing Try: Could you please provide specific details about the types of housing available and their costs?
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