Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively confirms participation and asks relevant questions, demonstrating a clear understanding of the task. However, grammatical errors and a lack of varied sentence structures detract from the overall quality.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I write this email to confirm that I will participate this seminar.”
- Inquiry about materials — “I was wondering if you could let me know whether any materials or equipment are required for the workshop.”
To improve
- Lack of syntactic variety Try: Could you please inform me if the payment should be made in advance or on the day of the workshop?
Score your own writing
Get the same TOEFL 2026 feedback on your own response — from $29 a month, cancel any time.
Level Up Your Email Writing
Your path to improvement
Master professional email writing with our expert guides. Learn the perfect structure, tone, and phrases to score 5/5 every time.
Email Writing Guide
Professional tone and structure for the Write an Email task
GuideTips
TOEFL Writing Templates
Effective templates and phrases for TOEFL writing
GuideTemplates
Common Grammar Mistakes
Top grammar errors that hurt your TOEFL score
GuideTips
Every great writer was once a learner. Keep improving!