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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the request for a refund and identifies specific issues with the workshop. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks variety in sentence structure, which detracts from its overall effectiveness.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing to reguest a refund for a "Digital Marketing Mastery" workshop I recently attended,because it was not as the promised goals.”
- Specific issues mentioned — “Unfortunately,there are many issues with the workshop such as it started late,and the promised guest speaker did not attend.”
To improve
- Lack of elaboration Try: because it did not meet the advertised promises of hands-on sessions and personalized feedback.
- Missing detailed request Try: I would appreciate it if you could process my refund promptly and provide a response from the company regarding this matter.
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