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4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
The email effectively communicates the necessary points with a polite tone and appropriate structure. However, slight improvements in vocabulary and phrasing could enhance clarity and sophistication.
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Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear reference to application details — “I am writing regarding the merit-based scholarship application I submitted three weeks ago under the reference number in your confirmation email”
- Expression of interest — “I remain very interested in this scholarship. It would allow me to focus fully on my studies next semester, and the program's emphasis on academic excellence matches my goals.”
To improve
- Lack of specific reference number Try: under the reference number 123456 as mentioned in your confirmation email
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