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3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email provides a clear intent to cancel the membership and asks about the procedure, but the elaboration is limited and the language contains several errors. Improvements in grammatical accuracy and more detailed explanations would enhance the overall effectiveness of the email.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
2.5/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2.5/5
Complete response2.5/5
Addresses requirements2.5/5
Working well
- Clear purpose — “I am writing to inform you that I want to cancel my membership.”
- Request for confirmation — “I would like an email that confirm that my membership is cancelled.”
To improve
- Incomplete explanation Try: Due to a change in my work schedule, I am unable to use the gym facilities during their operating hours.
- Lack of clarity in request Try: Could you please send me an email confirming the cancellation of my membership?
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