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FairPartially Successful

The email effectively expresses interest in the internship and includes a polite tone. However, it suffers from grammatical errors and lacks detailed elaboration on relevant experience, which limits its overall effectiveness.

19 / 30

Intermediate

Content

3/5

Breakdown

Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5

Working well

  • Expression of interest — “I am writing to express my interest in the summer internship opportunity offered by your organisation.
  • Relevant academic background — “I am third year student at Duke University, specialized in environmental science.

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