Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the issues faced, but it is marred by several grammatical errors and awkward sentence structures. Improving language accuracy and providing more specific details could enhance the overall quality.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear expression of disappointment — “I am dissapointed about this, because was a special occasion.”
- Acknowledgment of positive aspects — “I liked the ambient , was very nice, the decoration it is beatiful.”
To improve
- Lack of specific resolution suggestion Try: I suggest you consider offering a discount or a complimentary meal to address these issues.
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