Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.0/ 5
FairPartially Successful
The email effectively outlines the problem and requests assistance, but it suffers from grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that diminish clarity. Improvements in language accuracy and elaboration would enhance the overall effectiveness of the communication.
19 / 30
Intermediate
Content
3/5Breakdown
Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5
Working well
- Clear problem description — “Recently I bought a printer from an online electonics store, and it worked well for the first few days. However, it began showing a persistent errors and now refuses to print even basic documents.”
- Expresses urgency — “I would like to fixed it as soon possible because I need to printer my works-schools.”
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