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2.0/ 5
DevelopingMostly Unsuccessful
The email shows an attempt to address the requirements but suffers from numerous grammatical errors and a lack of clarity. The tone is informal and the greeting is incorrect, which detracts from the overall effectiveness of the communication.
14 / 30
Basic
Content
2/5Breakdown
Clear purpose2/5
Complete response2/5
Addresses requirements2/5
Working well
- Expresses gratitude — “Thank you for your time and consideration.”
- Clear identification — “My name is Ryuya Inoue.”
To improve
- Lack of clarity in request Try: Could you please clarify the details of the project proposal requirement for the internship application?
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