Back to SamplesWrite an Email — Sample
3.5/ 5
GoodPartially Successful
The email effectively communicates the necessary information and maintains a polite tone. However, grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing detract from the overall clarity and sophistication of the writing.
22 / 30
Intermediate
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear reference to application details — “My application ID is 877988, and I submitted it at 06/01 for your reference.”
- Expression of gratitude — “I am deeply excited for announcements and grateful that the university offers this scholarship in supporting of outstanding students in academic researches.”
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