3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response effectively argues for a hybrid work model, referencing points made by classmates. However, it could benefit from more specific examples and deeper engagement with the classmates' ideas.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
22 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Balanced Argument — “This balanced system would preserve flexibility without weakening communication, teamwork, or employees’ sense of belonging.”
To improve
- Lack of Specific Details Try: Include specific examples or data, such as 'According to a recent study, employees working remotely reported a 20% increase in productivity due to reduced stress levels.'
- Generic Examples Try: Provide a more concrete example, like 'For instance, in-person meetings at Company X led to a 30% faster resolution of technical issues compared to virtual meetings.'
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