3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively communicates the issue and request, but it suffers from grammatical errors and a lack of syntactic variety. Improving the greeting and sign-off, along with providing more specific details, would enhance the overall quality.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
22 / 30
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Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear explanation of the issue — “I registered for the course on November 3rd; however, I later discovered that I had enrolled in the wrong course.”
- Expression of interest — “I am really interested in digital marketing;”
To improve
- Lack of specific course name Try: I am really interested in the 'Advanced Digital Marketing Strategies' course;
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