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5.0band est.
GoodGenerally Successful
4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email is well-structured and addresses all necessary points clearly. Minor language inaccuracies and a lack of sophisticated vocabulary prevent it from reaching a higher score.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
25 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear order number provided — “Provide your order number”
- Detailed explanation of the issue — “Explain the difference between the model you ordered and the one you received”
To improve
- Improper capitalization Try: Mehran Shayeq
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