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5.0band est.
GoodGenerally Successful
4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
Addresses all requirements with clear, error-free language and appropriate tone. Lacks precise/idiomatic vocabulary and more complex sentence variety needed for top score.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Clear expression of interest
- Flexible availability — “I am flexible with my schedule and can adjust my availability based on your needs.”
To improve
- Lack of idiomatic expressions Try: I am flexible with my schedule and can tailor my availability to suit your needs.
- Limited elaboration on commitment Try: Could you provide more details on the expected commitment level, such as the frequency and duration of volunteer shifts?
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