Academic Discussion — scored sample answer
Artificial Intelligence in Everyday Life
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response is clear and engages with a classmate's perspective, which is commendable. However, it could benefit from more specific examples and deeper elaboration to fully support the argument. Minor grammatical errors are present but do not hinder comprehension.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Logical Argument — “By utilizing AI, employees can enhance workplace productivity and reduce overwhelming stress.”
To improve
- Lack of Specific Examples Try: Provide specific examples of AI tools or applications that improve productivity, such as AI-powered scheduling tools or data analysis software.
- Generic Conclusion Try: Strengthen the conclusion by summarizing key points and reiterating the main argument, such as highlighting specific societal benefits of AI.
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