Academic Discussion — scored sample answer
Artificial Intelligence in Everyday Life
4.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
This response offers a well-structured argument supporting AI's benefits. The examples provided are relevant and adequately support the main points. Language accuracy is generally good, with only minor issues.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
24 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear and direct thesis statement — “Artificial Intelligence (AI) is rapidly transforming our world, and in my opinion, its benefits generally outweigh its potential drawbacks for individuals and society.”
- Acknowledges counterarguments and presents a balanced perspective — “However, it's crucial to acknowledge the drawbacks. Job displacement due to automation is a significant concern, as AI takes over routine tasks. Ethical issues surrounding data privacy and algorithmic bias also need careful consideration.”
To improve
- Could offer more specific elaboration on mitigation strategies Try: I believe the proactive development of regulations and ethical guidelines, such as those promoting transparency in algorithmic decision-making and ensuring robust data protection protocols, can mitigate many of the risks.
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