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4.0/ 5
GoodGenerally Successful
The response effectively argues for strict regulations while acknowledging opposing views, demonstrating good elaboration and relevant examples. However, it lacks deeper engagement with classmates' arguments, which limits its overall effectiveness.
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Content
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Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5
Working well
- Balanced consideration of opposing views — “However, we cannot ignore Student 2’s concern about heavy regulations causing job losses and hurting the economy.”
- Specific example to support argument — “For example, governments can set a strict cap on factory emissions but offer huge tax cuts to companies that actively invest in solar panels or wind energy.”
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