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The response effectively argues for strict regulations while acknowledging opposing views, demonstrating good elaboration and relevant examples. However, it lacks deeper engagement with classmates' arguments, which limits its overall effectiveness.

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Content

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Clear purpose4/5
Complete response4/5
Addresses requirements4/5

Working well

  • Balanced consideration of opposing views — “However, we cannot ignore Student 2’s concern about heavy regulations causing job losses and hurting the economy.
  • Specific example to support argument — “For example, governments can set a strict cap on factory emissions but offer huge tax cuts to companies that actively invest in solar panels or wind energy.

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