Academic Discussion — scored sample answer
Digital Detox
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response effectively communicates the writer's perspective on digital detox and includes relevant personal experiences. However, the examples could be more specific to strengthen the argument and provide clearer insights.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Personal Experience — “When I set aside time each day to disconnect from my phone and computer, I noticed that my concentration improved and my overall stress level dropped.”
- Contrasting Viewpoint — “While Maya suggests that managing technology use might be more realistic, I believe that sometimes a complete break offers a clearer mental reset, as I found that turning off all devices allowed me to engage more fully with my surroundings and personal interests.”
To improve
- Generic Examples Try: Provide specific examples of activities or situations where concentration improved, such as 'I was able to complete my assignments faster and with more accuracy.'
- Lack of Specific Details Try: Include specific examples of personal interests or activities, such as 'I was able to read more books and spend quality time with family.'
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