3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response is clear and mostly relevant, with some variety in sentence structures. It provides examples but lacks specific details, which limits the depth of elaboration. Overall, it is a competent contribution with room for improvement in specificity and engagement with classmates.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Connection to local economy — “arts and culture promote the local economy”
- Educational benefits
To improve
- Generic examples Try: Provide a specific example of a museum or cultural event that has successfully boosted local business, such as 'The Louvre in Paris attracts millions of visitors annually, significantly contributing to the local economy through tourism.'
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