3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response effectively states a position and engages with a classmate's idea, which is commendable. However, the examples are somewhat generic and lack specificity. The language is mostly accurate but lacks variety and sophistication, which limits the overall score.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Use of Examples — “For example, students who receive free counseling can manage academic stress more effectively”
To improve
- Generic Examples Try: Provide specific data or a detailed case study from China to strengthen the example.
- Lack of Sophisticated Language Try: Use more advanced vocabulary, such as 'critical' instead of 'really significant', to enhance the academic tone.
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