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3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric

The response effectively states a position and provides a specific example, but it lacks deeper engagement with classmates and more detailed elaboration. The syntax is varied, but transitions are missing, which affects the flow of ideas.

Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate

21 / 30

legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale

Content

3.5/5

Breakdown

Clear purpose3.5/5
Complete response3.5/5
Addresses requirements3.5/5

Working well

  • Specific Example — “For example, an app called ChatGPT helps students find information with the click of a button.
  • Reinforcement of Thesis — “Taking everything into consideration, I believe that online learning is just as effective as traditional in-person classes.

To improve

  • Limited Elaboration Try: Expand on how virtual learning keeps students engaged, perhaps by discussing interactive features or flexibility.

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