3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response effectively argues for the benefits of online education and includes relevant points. However, it could improve by providing more specific examples and addressing minor grammatical issues.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
22 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Relevant explanations and examples — “includes relevant explanations and examples, such as classmates using internet-based platforms”
To improve
- Lack of specificity in examples Try: Include specific examples of internet-based platforms, such as Zoom or Google Classroom, to strengthen the argument.
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