3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response effectively argues in favor of online learning and includes relevant points about efficiency and communication. However, it could benefit from more specific examples and deeper engagement with classmates' ideas.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
22 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Relevant example — “students can avoid transportation costs and learn from anywhere”
- Counterargument acknowledgment — “While Student 2 argues that traditional in-person classes provide essential face-to-face interaction”
To improve
- Generic example Try: Provide a specific example, such as 'For instance, students living in rural areas can attend prestigious universities without relocating.'
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