Academic Discussion — scored sample answer
Online Learning
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response effectively states a position and engages with a classmate's argument, which strengthens its relevance. However, the examples are somewhat generic and could be more detailed. Minor grammatical errors are present but do not hinder comprehension.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Time and Cost Savings — “some supporting reasons, such as time and cost savings”
To improve
- Generic Examples Try: Include specific examples, such as a particular online course that saved time or money, to make the argument more compelling and relatable.
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