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FairPartially Successful

3.0/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric

The response is clear and relevant, but the examples are generic and lack depth. There is some syntactic variety, but the response mainly consists of simple sentences. Noticeable grammatical errors affect the overall clarity.

Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate

18 / 30

legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale

Content

3/5

Breakdown

Clear purpose3/5
Complete response3/5
Addresses requirements3/5

Working well

  • Relevance to Topic — “The response provides a relevant contribution to the discussion
  • Syntactic Variety — “The response contains some syntactic variety

To improve

  • Generic Examples Try: Provide specific examples or scenarios where online learning saves time and money, such as reduced commuting time or lower tuition fees.

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