Academic Discussion — scored sample answer
Remote Work
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response effectively argues for a hybrid work model, highlighting the benefits of both remote work and in-office presence. However, it could be improved with more specific examples and deeper engagement with peers' ideas.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Balanced Argument — “On one hand, remote work offers several advantages. Employees save time and money by avoiding daily commuting, which can reduce stress and improve work-life balance.”
- Logical Conclusion — “For these reasons, I believe a hybrid system is the best option.”
To improve
- Lack of Specific Examples Try: Include specific examples or studies that demonstrate increased productivity in remote work settings to strengthen this point.
- Generalization Try: Provide specific scenarios or examples where in-office presence has improved supervision and company culture to avoid generalization.
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