Academic Discussion — scored sample answer
Remote Work in Modern Society
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response effectively argues for the benefits of remote work, highlighting reduced commuting stress and increased flexibility. However, the examples provided are somewhat generic and lack specific details that would strengthen the argument.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Relevant Example — “For instance, employees can use the extra time they would normally spend traveling to prepare for meetings or complete important tasks.”
- Logical Reasoning — “remote work saves employees commuting time, allowing them to start work with less stress and better focus.”
To improve
- Lack of Specificity Try: In addition, remote work provides greater flexibility, allowing employees to attend to personal matters such as family commitments or health appointments without compromising their work schedule.
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