3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The response provides a clear position with adequate reasoning and minimal errors. However, it lacks specific examples and deeper engagement with classmates' ideas, which limits the score. Consider providing more detailed examples and engaging more deeply with peers' arguments to enhance the response.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
3.5/5Breakdown
Working well
- Use of examples — “For example, people can find jobs easily in companies, restaurants, and local shops.”
To improve
- Lack of specific details Try: Provide specific examples of academic institutions or programs that are available in urban areas to strengthen the argument.
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