Write an Email — scored sample answer
You are a sophomore at Greenfield University interested in joining…
3.5/5 on the ETS 0-5 rater rubric
The email effectively addresses the task and is polite, but it contains some language errors and lacks syntactic variety. Improving vocabulary precision and correcting minor errors would enhance the response.
Reach120 practice band estimate — not an official ETS score How we estimate
21 / 30
legacy comparison · pre-2026 scale
Content
4/5Breakdown
Working well
- Clear introduction — “My name is [name withheld], and I am a sophomore at Greenfield University.”
- Expresses eagerness — “I am eager to get involved.”
To improve
- Lack of syntactic variety Try: Could you please provide information on how to become a member and let me know about any upcoming meetings or events I should attend?
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